PierShaft

I have a band (Wich I'm the only one in it for now) and I do everything With my guitar, A rockband mic and FL Studio 9 (Drums, record, effects, mix and master) Please tell me what you think about my song, what could be better and what should stay that way. : ( I also have 2 other rough demo on our channel ) I didn't put the vocals yet cause I'm not sure about what type of screams I should put on, I'm working on it.. Thanks for the feedbacks ^^ \m/