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On 4/17/2018 at 7:43 AM, AshKillem said:

Here's the song, if you're interested hollar at me, email works too as I'm not always logged in here: [email protected]


Hi, @AshKillem, your video is down but i remember a bit about your song for earlier (it was kinda melodeathy, right?). Were you after clean or screamed vocals? And do you have parts written or would you have the vocalist come up with something? I'm pretty busy for the next couple of days, but if you want I could probably come up with something with screams/growls over the weekend.

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On 4/17/2018 at 8:01 PM, Will said:

Hi, @AshKillem, your video is down but i remember a bit about your song for earlier (it was kinda melodeathy, right?). Were you after clean or screamed vocals? And do you have parts written or would you have the vocalist come up with something? I'm pretty busy for the next couple of days, but if you want I could probably come up with something with screams/growls over the weekend.

Hey sorry for the late reply man, been busy and mad. But yeah it's the more melodeathy one haha. I think.. Here it is just in case 

Like the story goes
It's all wrong again, the town fairs back in
Give me flight, sweet anesthesia
Wish they could keep me under
Cause I'm always going under
Spectacle and sick of your front row seats
Because it's just not right
And no! Don't YOU dare
Like a baby in a crib
Knowing nothing but a mother 
But the tits running dry
And I still can't walk
But you! I point the finger 
Outrageous drunken stares
How you take your notes, the most twisted of things
You don't think to care
Would you? Can you? 
Let it settle let it be 
It will mold with it's teachers
Learning nothing from any busybody bystander but bitterness and discontent
The crack in my world has grown larger
I wonder if my sight will be taken with it
Where devils dance in submersion of unnerving emotions
At least thats the picture they painted
And how would I know the difference 
The dirts in the stain
And it's everywhere, ever corner
Disheartened noise of their native tounge
I hope I am concealed from further pains
But somethings brewing like a pregnant mother, 
And I'm scared I may birth this child
Strange feeling when nothing feels real anymore
But I never see a thing, hear a word
Perpetual waiting game 
Unknown future, unseen hand
I don't like how it's unfolding
But I don't know how else to be
I always fuck things up and I always will
Wish I could say different but understanding has come to pass
Inside me, abnormality
And there's something new 
a subtle growth of darker things
I am disturbed
I'm Honest, don't know how to feel
This creates a shaking
So I hold on tight, making sure I don't lose the dearest part of me 
The last piece that's left of me, the part that's still alive and feeling
Scared to death I'll loose that notch
And it keeps me from connection, because I won't be someone I'm not 
And I'll fight to the death for it too
Does it matter to you? 
How I feel? How I've been? Are there many like me?
Because I feel this all the time and seldom do they rescue
I know I'm supposed to be a man but I never learned and I'm not stronger
I don't know if it was my fault but my legs are broken and it's hard to stand
It starts again the bells chimes in
The crows caw and my hair is on end
Whole town gawking
Passed embarrassing, that was brutal
Shame is woven, thick as theives
Bothersome nuisance; annoying me
Whole other story I'd hate to read
I can't disconect from this leech that keeps me from being noraml
I don't know how I dug this hole
Can I ever be apart of that world again or have I lost the missing piece?
I'm scared to be confident again, like I don't deserve it
Just another lie, they say they all come from devil
And that's not fair I never had a chance
Wish we'd just write him out of the story
One or two reasons more, mostly for freedom
Minds build some errie cages that's all
But I know I'm not this thing
Just held here by a demon
Like I can never reach out and show you who I really am
Like Cinderella didn't get the slippers
Oh what I would do to change this motion
My will doesn't seem to care so send me a wishing well 
Would you? Cause I've been waiting 
Waiting for someone like me, who will see the victim, I mostly am
So see me drowning wish to save me,
Don't hate me like they hate me 
Most of them do most of the time
Its not all your fault when lonliness is your guide
But I'm still slipping further away
Is it inevitable this decent?
Blackholes don't let go and that scares me away, to thoughts of existing
Uncomfortable feelings, what I am, what makes me?
Seems like black nothing to me
Not like it appears no, less than
What we are, what this is?
I'll tell you and you'll sink
Waves in the sea ants on the mound
Nothing, no meaning.. purpose is MIA forever no dwelling 
That doesn't scare me or beat me dead 
Or leave me unsettled or messed up in the head..
Beautiful feeling escaping where I've been
Solace, like the morning 
Like I was guilty on trial
The end


Also man, since I don't really check up on here often, you should hit me up via email; [email protected] or through facebook; https://www.facebook.com/michael.leahcim.12139

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